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DM692

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Good Song!

I like this song, it just kind of gives you a good vibe. The instruments and sounds are pretty much perfect, the drums accent the music perfectly, and the rhythm sounds good.

The only thing I thinkyou could fix is the buzz noise that starts at 2:04, and ends at 2:05. Just kind of kills the vibe. Other then that, amazing song!

-=DM692=-

Too Distorted

In all honesty, this song probably has some potential, but your downfall was that you used too much distortion. If you tone that down, and give the snare drum more of a high pitched, cracking noise, it would sound a lot better.

-=DM692=-

Aerodin responds:

Thanks for your comment.
I respect your opinion, but honestly i don't know what you're talking about with the distortion. And i deserved more than a 2 if you thought this song has potential. I'll remind you on the fact that this is hardcore though, and this music style is very distorted, very hard, and especially the bass is hard. So you have to be able to handle it. Maybe you just ... can't. But if you say so bud.

Pretty damn good!

Like I said, the whole song is pretty good, and has a neat feel to it. The drums and the orchestra go perfectly together.

Keep up the great work, -=DM692=-

(P.S., I 5'd because some bastard 0-bombed you.)

Mostly Good

The lyrics are pretty good, and the drum beat that goes under it fits perfectly.

The only issue I have with it is there's never any change in tempo or feeling in the lyrics. Other than that, it's great!

Keep up the good work, -=DM692=-

RoobyKillAll responds:

No change in tempo? I speed my flow tempo up a good few times. And yeah I get what you mean by emotion in the lyrics. I'm going to try turning up the track in my headphones so I throw my voice a bit more.
Thanks

Pretty Good!

I liked the dark, ambient feel of the music, and the drum beats behind it. You pulled those 2 things together and made a great song out of it.

Good job, and keep up the good work!

-=DM692=-

dx5231 responds:

haha, thanks man

Great Beat!

I really liked the way this song sounded, but on the main beat, the part in front that was a constant up-down rythem, was a little too distorted for my taste.

Fix that single issue, and this song is easily a favorite!

-=DM692=-

TheDylanGod responds:

i'll see what i can do. You mean the part that starts off the song right?

Great Sound!

I like the sound and feeling this song gives off, it just gives you good vibes.

Now for the actual sound, I like the way all the instruments sounded together, and it sounds like you actually put some effort into mixing them together.

Great work, keep it up!

-=DM692=-

evil-genius20 responds:

thanks for the review. i felt this one was an improvement over the last one as it had a different instrument set

Hindered by repitition

The concept and sounds for this song were good, but it just sounded very repetitive and sloppy when it was all put together. Try remixing this with less repitition and it could be good.

-=DM692=-

It has potential!

I like the style of music this is in, but it feels as if there's something missing from it, such as a backing track, or some slow, reverberating drums. I know it's a preview, but if you add these things it could be great!

-=DM692=-

DJredsocks responds:

hey dude
thanks for the tips, ive uploaded the song now, i'll change it if u think it doesnt fit the quota on newgrounds (or in your head :P)

DJredsocks

Nice work!

Like I said, nice work, but it just didn't seem full enough.

I liked the front track and the drum backing, but it just seemed like it was missing something, something to make it fuller-sounding, like a bass track behind it.

Good job, keep it up!

FairSquare responds:

Maybe it is missing bass.
Thanks for the review and advice!

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